Claims

[Aslan]

Okay here we go:

So here is where you post when you want to claim a character to make a bio for. You will copy the code below, fill it out and post! Pretty easy hey? Do not make the bio yet, because if another person wants it there will be a role-play contest to see who will get the character. I Will be deciding who gets it. Only when I tell you to, with any character, may you make the bio.

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Character wanted: What charcater are you claiming?
How long have you role-played: Don't lie please because I can tell by people's skill and I'll find you out andbe upset. Just be truthful, I do not and will not allow any of my staff discriminate against first timers
Why should I give this character to you: Honestly, just like two sentances, I'm pretty flexable with it
Example: A minimum of 150 words role-play exampel as the character you are claiming


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[b]Character wanted:[/b] What charcater are you claiming?
[b]How long have you role-played:[/b] Don't lie please because I can tell by people's skill and I'll find you out andbe upset. Just be truthful, I do not and will not allow any of my staff discriminate against first timers
[b]Why should I give this character to you:[/b] Honestly, just like two sentances, I'm pretty flexable with it
[b]Example:[/b]I would like a minimum of 150 words role-play example as the character your trying out for.[/size][/blockquote]


[Maugrim]

Character wanted: Susan

How long have you role-played: I have been role playing since 2007. I may not be as good as others but I joined the original Hidden Clans March 2007. I have gotten better at Pole playing because of A site called Sang-Souille because there rule says that you must have 200 words per post!
Why should I give this character to you: I have been a role player for a long time, and i love writing(its my hobby). I also loved the books but i have only read up to prince caspion. also i was on the one with the boat painting but thats all I know up to. My favourite character was always Susan and Lucy.
Example:

As Lucy came and told them her story Susan thought she was being crazy. How could she be thinking of a wardrobe leading to a whole new world. As edmund told them they were just playing Lucy started to have tears come down her eyes. "Edmund! Can you see your hurting her feelings!" Susan rubbed her back to comfort her. Ever since they left there mom she had to be the motherly figure. She told Lucy it was okay.

The next morning it was nice and sunny out so they wanted to play cricket outside. As Edmund swung, the ball went through the large window. What were they going to do. They ran inside to see how bad the damage was. Then they heard someone coming, and they did not want to be caught. They all ran down the several halls of the mansion. They tried many doors, but all of them were looked. They finally got to one door that opened. What was inside of of the room made Susan sigh. "You have got to be kidding me" She obviously didn't want to go in. They all backed into the closet. They all tried to get to the end. However, instead of there being some old worn out would there was light. As soon as Susan turned around it was a huge shock!

[Susan Pevensie]

Character wanted: Susan Pevensie
How long have you role-played:I am a first timer
Why should I give this character to you: I have throughly enjoyed all the books. My Friends and I are quite the Narnia fanatics and I have a huge passion for writing. I have always identified with Susan more then the other Pevensie children and I would love the opportunity to represent her in a new light.
Example:

It wasn't supposed to be like this. Sitting lodged between Edmund and Lucy, up to her knee's in luggage. Susan pushed back her brown long hair to reveal a drastically changing countryside. She wanted to stay home, she wanted her old life back already. Instead she would have to watch Lucy and Edmund. "We are at least together," murmured Peter. Susan merely nodded. Peter knew full well how dull this was going to be. "I can't wait, and maybe we'll get to explore," her fake attempt at excitement worked. Lucy smiled and then regarded Susan intently. "I'm sure the house is huge. Maybe we can play hide and go seek or racket ball." Peter cast her a fleeting glance. Obviously Susan knew she was really getting Lucy's hopes up. But Mother had told her to take care of Lucy, and she needed to at least boost her morale. Although the entire situation was necessary it would surely bring more hardship to the family.

She really hoped and prayed that there were no animals where they were going. Preforming petty farm tasks would surely kill her. Besides she was supposed to be spending most of her summer with Emily. Susan often admired the numerous trinkets Emily had. Her older sister, Elisabeth was very pretty. She had once complimented Susan on her beauty but in her head it wasn't enough. Elisabeth was confident and Susan had convinced herself that with age comes confidence. She longed to be like that. All grown up and beautiful.

Edmund stirred in his sleep and nestled closer to Susan. Glancing down upon him she noticed a huge bruise on his outside cheek. She cast one last worried look at it before addressing the extremely quiet Lucy. "Mom will be all right. She has the bomb shelter. Besides she is a smart woman Lucy." Lucy just nodded and Susan felt that Lucy had finally seen through her desperate attempt to comfort her.

The train lurched to a sudden stop, sending Edmund's head sailing to hit the window. Susan muffled a laugh when she realized that Edmund was still asleep. So that was how he got that bruise. Noise entered the hallway and children began to adjust. When the two children sharing the compartment with the Pevensie's left Susan crawled onto the seat and sighed. She stretched and sank slowly, into a deep sleep.

"Susan, are you alright? You have moaning and turning in your sleep." Her eyelids opened to briefly reveal her sibling hovering over her. "It must have been my dream," she murmured. Lucy gave her an eager look. "It was about a lion, and he was protecting me from something I couldn't see,"she stammered. The dream had been much more complicated then that. "We should gather our stuff, our stop is next," directed Peter

[Aslan]

Okay so before I announce who the winner is I'd like to mention that both of your auditions were very well done. Both reasons were good but sadly I can only choose oen person to play Susan.

The winner is -drumroll please-: Susan!

RP Sample:
Your RP sample was amazing considering you are a first timer. I really liked how you were in detail, noticing who people aquired things and such. I thought you portrayed her very well ,especially the part about her wantign to be beautiful. Don't go too overboard on it yet, because it sin't tilll Voyage of the Dawn Treader we find out she is slef-obsessed -giggle-. Also the length was amazing.

Springy you did very well also. Your Rp sample was very good as well, but there are a few things I would like to point out. Spellign is one thing, only because you are using some words in the wrong context. Such as wood. You put would, which is the wrong type of wood. It was also a little bit rushed. It's good to be specific and detailed, that way you can also make it longer.

Good job to both of you.

Reason for wanting character:
Susan I felt I could really relate to why you wanted Susan. I felt that you wanted her because you could personally relate to her. Also I think your passion for writting is eveident in your example. I look foreward to seeing the new light you'll present her in.

Springy I thin your reason was good as well, but you more put it about writting as oppsed to your love for the books. I'm glad you mentioned your favorite characters though. Your reason could be little more in depth for future refrences.

Final Comments:
Susan congrats on winning and I hope you can remain active to play her. I loved everything you did, keep up the good work!

Springy I'm sorry, but you may try out for another character, perhaphs you'd like to play Mr. Beaver, I think I would get quite a laugh out of it whenever I read your posts with him. He is still a main character. I think you'd fit him very well.

Thank-you for your time both of you in participating in this competition.

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[Susan Pevensie]

Thank you Aslan,
and Springy i thought you did good.

[Tumnus]

Character wanted: Mr. Tumnus
How long have you role-played: Since 2008, but I am not that good at it.
Why should I give this character to you: I believe that it would be alot of fun to be Mr.Tumnus, I also think that I would be able to put myself in his shoes. He would be a great character to play.
Example:Mr. Tumnus was practically running back to his warm cozy home. "You have to slow down or someone will suspect something," he scoled himself in a stern voice. He slowed his pace down to a brisk walk, but a small voice kept telling him to run, get away as fast as you can! They are going to catch you! Mr.Tumnus shoved these voices off to the side and kept his pace. All was going fine and Mr. Tumnus was starting to calm down when a avalanche of snow fell from the top of a tall pine right behind him. That noise shattered his nerves, and he bolted to his house, slamming his door behind him. He stood there panting for twenty seconds before he let his death grip on the door handle go. He walked toward the kitchen on shaky legs. It took Mr. Tumnus several tries before he could fill up the tea kettle. When it was finally on the fire and heating up, Mr. Tumnus walked up to his bookshelf. He carefully pulled out a volume from the top shelf. He stared at the title for a bit before putting the large book back on the shelf. "Of course there is such things as Humans," Mr. Tumnus told himself. "I have recently met one."
The kettle started to whistle and Mr.Tumnus went to go cheack on it. He made himself a cup of steaming tea and sat down with it and a piece of bread with sardines on it. He did not trust him self to toast the bread. He took a bite, and made a face, "Isn't as good as it is toasted." He put the sandwich down and rubbed his head with his hands. "I have to c alm down, anyway, if someone had seen me, they would have reported it by now right?" This logic helped him get through the night and several days.
This logic though failed him one day. Mr. Tumnus was in the kitchen making himself some breakfast before he would go on his daily walk, when his front door burst open. A large wolf came slowly through the door way. His large muscles rippled under his matted fur. The wolf saw Mr. Tumnus nad he leaped at him. That was the last thing he remembered before he was in front of the witch herself.

[Aslan]

Okay Here is my update on things. Springy I'm sorry but I'm waiting for more peopel to join before I give away the two remaining Pevensies, to attract more people if you get what I say.

The winner for Mr. Tumnus is -drumroll pelase- :Tumnus!

Congrats! You did awsome. Here are my notes. Please read all of them xD.

Roleplay Example:
Excellent! I absolutly loved it because it was so detailed and in depth, like how he grips the door and thinks to himself....I'm stunned at how good it was for only role-playing since 2008. It was very good. Remember proper grammer and spelling though, because that is very important for everyone including you. Great job overall!

Reason for wanting character:
Okay, this was okay, because I believe you how the ability to understand him and have fun with him and be able to put yourself in hsi shoes. It was very good. But I'd like to see it a little more in depth next tiem you claim a charater because then I really feel more coming from you.

Final Comments:
Overall very good. I was more impressed with the RP Sample then the reason, but you can work on that for next time. Remember proper grammer and spelling! Congrats!

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[Maugrim]

Character wanted: Maurgim
I have been an role player for about two-three years now.
Being a mysterious fearless wolf seems like a fun type of character. I haven't really played a character like this before but I have always wanted to try someone like him. He works for the white which and he is on the "evil" side which i think will toss things around for me in a good way.
Example:maurgim dashed through the under bush to try to get to the children before sun-up. He signaled the other wolves to follow him. Of course he was the fastest out of the pack. The white which was not pleased at the moment. That stupid edmund kid had to come without the other daughters of eve and son of adam. Oh what he would do to stay up on top. He could hear the trees whispering to themselves of what they had heard. He could smell there strong sent like a man can smell a woman's perfume. He felt strongly attracted to it. IN the distance the little dam was strongly supported with lights. He heard scampering inside of the dam. How was he going to get in? that was the question. He looked anywhere to get in. He looked around starting to snarl with frustration. He finally found the entrance. " It is here!" He dug into the dam as hard as his muscles would let him. He got a big enough hole to let him in. He ran around the room searching for a sent of them. Lucky for him he had a sent as strong as a fish could swim. He broke through this small little door. He raced down the corridor of the underground tunnel. As He got to the out side once again there was a fox staring right at him. " Well hello foxeh! nice to see you again." Maurgim was hungry and he started to have a wide grin on his face.

[Aslan]

Okay so obviously only one person rtied out for this character but here is the update anyways.

The winner of Maugrim is -drumroll please-: Springy!

Role-play Sample:
You had a wonderful RP Example, better than any you've doen yet. I really enjoyed how you played him, I was laughing. You were very thurough and discriptive. Please remember to use proper grammer, puncuation and spelling in all areas though. I really liked it all though, even if the pace was a little fast, it is a single post after all.

Reason for wanting character:
I like dit. I'm glad you wanted to try something new and very pleased you have createdthe first evil character. I think you are thurouhly passionate about playing him and I trust this passion will be evident in all posts.

Final Comments:
Remember not to make the posts to swift. Good job on being descriptive,you played him very well. Congrats!

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[enchanted]

Character wanted: Peter Pevensie
How long have you role-played: About three years,
Why should I give this character to you: Well, I've been roleplaying for three years as I have said. I can be counted on to come on the site just about every day unless I tell you I am going somewhere or I can't come on because of an emergency. If I am grounded I will try and come on to tell you. I can also be quite literate if I choose, though I am prone to a bad day or too. For having this character in general I think I would be quite good. Peter is my favorite out of the four children in the books and I was happy when I saw that he was still up to be claimed. I love the thought of playing him, the way is is protective of his siblings and the leadership role he takes before them.
Example:
Peter pressed his ear to the cold wooden door of the wardrobe, listening if he could still hear the footsteps. Mrs. Macready could be anywhere now, maybe she was in this very room! He could hear Susans breathing in the gloom next to him, but he could not tell where Lucy or Edmund were. Where had they got to now? It was a wardrobe for goodness sake! He looked around, his eyes becoming accustomed to the lack of light, he parted some heavy fur coats behind him. Was this one of Edmunds jokes?
The wardrobe slowly became colder, and the coats became... harder? The fur seemed spikey and cold. Almost like it was frozen. Suddenly he was looking at a clearing, surrounded by pine trees. He could see a small figure up ahead by a single light, Lucy? He walked towards the figure at a fast pace, Susan right behind him. It was Lucy, she was here, he felt so releived. She could be anywhere here, in the wardrobe...
He couldn't beleive it, Lucy was telling the truth! This was the place she had said was in the wardrobe. He felt slightly embarassed, how could he not have beleived his little sister? She was so sweet and of course she always told the truth!
"I told you," Lucy said proudly as she saw him staring around the clearing, "This is the place!"
"I am so sorry I didn't beleive you!" Peter said, "You were right!"
Edmund walked out of the trees by his side, Peter glared at him as Susan also apologised to Lucy.
"I knew you were lying about something!" He said angrily, "This of all the things! Why didn't you back your sister up?!"

[Peter Pevensie]

Character wanted: Peter Pevensie

How long have you role-played: four years

Why should I give this character to you: I believe I have the skill needed to play a main character. After four years of roleplaying, I consider myself experienced enough to provide a literate post. I also have excellent spelling and grammar, and I love to delve into a character. Furthermore, I have a good grasp of British slang that Peter would use, and, as a history buff, am familiar with the period of World War II, so I could play Peter both in and out of Narnia. I have read all of the books multiple times and have seen the movies, so I am familiar with them. I am also extremely active, and will post multiple times a day, if necessary. I have played Peter on other sites and have grown familiar with him. I can identify with Peter because I have a younger sibling. I always do my best to do what is right, and can be overprotective at times. I do not claim to be better than anyone else, but if you allow me to play Peter, I hope to prove myself a worthy choice.

Example:
Peter brushed his hair back from his forehead to look around the tiny cabin of the train. Out the window, the English countryside was speeding by, reminding him that with each moment that elapsed, their home - and their mum - was becoming further and further away. He looked down at Lucy, who was seated next to him and had seized her hand. He smiled a little at her and squeezed her little hand reassuringly. It seemed so small in comparison to his. She was just so small. He had promised their mum that nothing would happen to her, and anyone who knew him would wager that he would make good on that promise, no matter what happened.

He glanced to his left. Susan was on the other side of him, gazing out the window as if searching for an elusive answer that sped by with the countryside. Just as his father and the Americans were fighting the Germans together, he and Susan were a united force against the fear that was threatening to break apart his family. It was true that he and Susan fought on occasion, but more often than not, they had to work as a team to keep Edmund from bullying Lucy. Peter trusted Susan. She worked so long and hard to take care of their family, and he had vowed that he would take care of her. She was so strong.

Sitting across the car from where Peter sat was Edmund. He was sulking in the corner, probably thinking to himself how much he hated train cars, and even more likely, how much he hated Peter. How Peter wished he could fix things with his brother. They had been close, once. Back when Dad had been home. But since then, Peter had grown up, and Edmund hadn't. As much as Peter wanted to keep Lucy from growing up (she would always be his baby sister), he wanted Edmund to grow up. All of the love and sympathy he felt for his younger brother somehow got mangled into anger. Peter knew that this was all his fault. But he felt that unless something truly fantastic happened, he couldn't fix it all on his own.

Isolated there in the train car, with everything he knew falling away by the mile, Peter looked around once more at the siblings who surrounded him. They were all he had left now. And for some reason that he couldn't quite put his finger on, he still felt alone.

Thank you for taking the time to read! Good luck to everyone. I look forward to roleplaying with you, whether as Peter or another character.

- Julie

[Aslan]

Oh my, both Peter auditions are very well done, in fact this was a very hard choice for me to make but I have come to a conclusion.

The winner of Peter is -drumroll-: Peter Pevensie 2 (which would be the later post of the two, or Julie)

Role-play Sample:

Peter I liked your RPG sample, it was very detailed and descriptive. It was enjoyable to read, but there are a few things I have to point out. I didn't feel like I saw Peter in there.It was hard for me to line him up with the character he really is. I didn't see his personality come through very much, and I felt slightly distant from him. The details were good, but I didn't see him.

Julie. I almost cried when I read yours. I felt so like Peter, I felt his burdans and his problems, hsi secrets and his life, his role and the stress and pressure, and I almost broke down. It was exactly like his character. I felt like I was right there in the train, and It was absoulutly amazing.

Reason for wanting Character:

Peter, I like the charater Peter as well. I also like how he is a leader. I also am on everyday unless I'm away, and I'm experianced and just about everything you've said. I didn't really feel like you wanted him enough or your reason was really any different than the standard one.

Julie. I felt like your reason could be justified and it was very very good because you can identify with him and I feel like your RPG Sample really furthered that and displayed that.

Overall Comments:

Peter yours was good. I highly encourage you to try out for another character and change your name, in fact please do because you seem like a very good asset for my site. I loiked your Sample, but connect more with your character in them.

Julie, congrats. I loved your Sample and my heart broke for Peter in it. Please play him well and good job on the reason as well.

Good job to both of you! They were both excellent, but there is only one of him. Great job again.

[silenzioso]

Character wanted: Jadis, the White Witch

How long have you role-played: Umm... Since I was nine, so four or five years, I guess.

Why should I give this character to you: You should give me this rank because you love me. Honestly, I'm not really sure that you should. Yep, I'm that brutally honest. If anyone else applies who has read the books, by all means: give it to them. That being said, let's say no one else does apply for this role. I will read the books. No doubt in my mind that if I get this role-- or if I don't, for that matter-- I will read the books. That aside, I feel that I am decently good at playing the role of evil/sinister characters, though, really, it's not my place to say it. At any rate, I'm pretty good at roleplaying in general, if I may say so myself. Honestly, one thing about auditions is that I'm none too good at them, and I don't really ever know what to say. So yeah, that's why that sucked so bad. =)

Example:

Jadis was quite a sight to see: not only her dazzling beauty, but her astounding height that let her tower over anyone she met, and her skin, as white as the snow all around her. And of course she looked grand in her sleigh pulled by strong, white reindeer. Looking as eye-catching as she did, how could it be that something caught her eye and surprised her in the most delightful way?

The Son of Adam was wandering around in her snowy land, looking slightly confused but amazingly composed. The Queen of Narnia did not expect to see any humans any time soon, and the fact that there was one standing right in front of her worried her. She called to stop the sleigh and beckoned for the child to come to her. "Well hello, there," she said, her cold voice slightly softer as she spoke to the boy.

She made conversation with the Son of Adam, remaining friendly and calm as long as she could. She was finding out important information from him. He had introduced himself as Edmund Pevensie. The Son of Adam had a brother and two sisters. After the two had parted ways, Jadis considered what she had just learned. It seemed clear to her that they could easily be the Sons of Adam and the Daughters of Eve the prophecy spoke of. If such were the case, she would need to get rid of them. Quickly.

No one could threaten her rule. She would not let her wintery reign be destroyed so easily.

So, I apologize for how bad that was. I probably made some mistakes, but forgive that, if you will. =)

[Aslan]

Ok here's my latest update ya'll:

The winner of Jadis/White Witch is -drumroll please-: Silenzioso!

Role-play Sample:
Frisk Woman! Don't be so hard on yourself. You played her very well, I liked the description, and even though you've not read the books, I was amazed you put in everything about the prophecy and all of that. It was very good. Just remember to make her even more evil. She actually tells everyone she's human, but she's got Giant blood in her viens, so yeah. It was good, make her even more evil though Si. Great Job.

Reason for Wanting Character:
Yes, you rock at playing evil and sinister charries. Your awsoem at it and from the past year or two that I've RP'd with you, you never cease o amaze me so I'm counting on you silly. I highly encourage you to read the books, and if you've seen the movies, she's really that evil. So it was very good.

Overall Comments:
I liked it a lot. I think you can play her up a little more evil, but I'm happy to have you on board because I know I can trust you and count on you. Don't let me down!

[GINARRBRIK ?!]

Character wanted: ginarrbrik.
How long have you role-played: two 'n a half years.
Why should I give this character to you: well, honestly, you don't have to. my roleplaying is a bit rusty. but, since someone here is a bit pushy for meh to get teh position i'm gonna try out for it anyways. so, i suppose i'm kinda within the semi-literate to literate level of roleplaying, and am sorta okay with roleplaying in general. but, i'm very dedicated to roleplaying and writing—now an everyday, much-needed hobby. xP however, i've read only the LWW, and that was a looong time ago, in fourth grade, and i hardly remember it. -shrugs- and plus, it's been awhile since i've played devious charrie, so i'd like to give it a shot.

Example:

[ it doesn't have to be a scene from the story, right? this is just a fan-fic i had put together quickly. ]

It was almost freezing out, but he was use to it. From all of his years serving as Jadis's right-hand dwarf, Ginarrbrik had to almost adapt to the cold weather that his master had created. It was his job as a sleigh driver for his master, and that wasn't sipping tea in a comfy chair beside the fire, listening to little scary stories. So out into the cold he went. Rather, the black dwarf took pride in his work. Working as Jadis's servant and sleigh driver had got to be more rewarding than those pitiful hides and flesh called Narnians, out there, trying to stand off against Jadis's mighty power. He got warm food and drink and shelter from his master, and that seemed rewarding enough for a skilled and experienced sleigh driver like himself, he usually vainly thought.

It wasn't as cold of late, perhaps the winter itself, or his accustom to the nippy, chilly weather, but the black dwarf had donned a coat made of polar bear fur, the warmest of all fur coats he had tried, his red hood with its gold tassel hanging from its point, and a pair of thick boots anyway. Ginarrbrik shuffled through the soft, ankle-deep blanket of glistening, milky white snow, his boots kicking up flakes of the powdery substance into the air. It was late after dusk, and the slate blue sky above was punched out with millions of tiny, twinkling stars, a rare sight here in the winter weathers. Although the dwarf preferred to have others see and think of him as a cold and heartless creature with no love for anything, Ginarrbrik secretly admired the twinkling stars above his head. They were beautiful, sparkling tears of the sun—for it had to leave for night to come over, so he was told long ago.

The black-bearded dwarf made for the entrance of Jadis's castle, passing through the courtyard, which was littered with stone figures of beasts, from centaurs to tigers, fauns to gryphons. He had finished his task for the night: summon the hags for the Queen. Ginarrbrik had no idea why they were needed, but he didn't care. Now, what awaited him was warm food and drink, and that was all he needed. Ginarrbrik trudged up the steps and into the ice palace. His breath coming out in puffs of haze, the black dwarf glanced around, searching for his master. She appeared before he heard her. The Queen skittered almost silently over the ice floor, her white robe streaming out behind her, her strawberry blonde hair fluttering gracefully after her. The most striking feature she had was her white skin; it wasn't just white, but white like the snow she made.

Ginarrbrik knew instantly that she was in a bad mood... for some reason. Jadis glared him down and marched off toward her throne, sweeping past him. Flakes of snow that found place upon his hood and beard swirled by her hasty movement. Ginarrbrik trailed behind her reluctantly. Waiting and getting the Queen even more annoyed wasn't going to help him. Jadis whirled and sat gracefully down upon her throne, waving her robe away. "What is it, Ginarrbrik?" she asked irritably in her clear, icy voice. The black dwarf shuffled back a pace. "Errr... Your Majesty. The hags..." his voice trailed off as her gaze bore into him.

"Well? Speak up, Ginarrbrik!" Jadis said, the irritation growing in her voice. "Does the meeting sound good to them? Speak!" The black dwarf lowered his eyes. "Uhmm... Your Highness, they thought that maybe you could go over..." Ginarrbrik cringed back with fright, done with only half of his sentence, when Jadis jumped up, roaring, "Ginarrbrik, I ask you only one simple thing: make sure they agree to meet me here! Why couldn't you do that simple request I ask of you?" Her servant opened his mouth to speak, but Jadis cut him off. "Nevermind, you dwarf! I'll deal with them myself! You don't know how important this is, anyway. Leave now!" In almost a blink of an eye, Ginarrbrik the black-bearded dwarf fled the room.

[ gah. horrible. this was all i could put together. xP ]

xoxo,
rosie