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Marrow
Aug 17, 2009 21:23:29 GMT -5
Post by Marrow on Aug 17, 2009 21:23:29 GMT -5
Your Info; Your Name: Lillian Years Role-playing: At least two. Other Characters: My lovely Lillian! Yay!
Character Info; Characters Name: Marrow Age: 3 years Race: Talking wolf Male or Female: Male Aslan or Witch's side: Witch's side.
Personality: Marrow is nasty, always depressed and easily annoyed by others. He hates being confused and teased by others. Very determined and witty, has a good head on his shoulders. Dislikes 1 year old wolves and wolverines that tease. Enjoys the Queen's disciplinary actions and doing her dirty work which he would usually want to do for fun. Loves it when others can understand him. Marrow has a soft gentle side that is dominated by his dark side. He likes little pups who pay attention to their parents. Marrow absolutely adores kind and gentle animals which kind of freaks out everyone. He also keeps his soft side hidden deep inside himself which makes him rough around the egdes, but gentle inside. It's a wonder how he keeps himself together! Description of Physical Being: Marrow has a deep ebony pelt that is silky smooth on his muscular body. He has eyes are a deep reddish brown color that reflect his gentle side deeply. His tail is a foot long and is a danger if you're behind him when he's wagging his tail. His left front paw has a white toe that he calls 'his lucky toe'. Is often seen laying on his back staring at the ever changing sky. He also has a scar on his muzzle and has rough paw pads as well. He has excellent sight, hearing, scent detection and coordination on the ice. History: He was born during a blizzard the night his father died. It was unbearable to him to lose his father. Unfortunately, a few months later his mother died by trying unsuccessfully to save his siblings who barely listened from the great river. At age of two years old he offered his services to Jadis. Little did he know that his cousin joined soon after. He hoped that he'd never make a mistake like his siblings did. Role-play Sample Marrow lay on his back staring at the stars right next to where his fathers body was. He loved being around the castle of the witches. Pain seared through his heart; the pain, of loss. His love for family was unbreakable. Lillian, his cousin however, he did not like much. Marrow slowly stood up and dashed through the forest like fire to the place of his sleeping. He lay on his back in the courtyard looking very pleased that he had duties at the castle. Love, hate, it all made him confused and frustrated. His mixture of feelings were interrupted by noise of Lillian slipping and falling somewhere else in the courtyard. "Dang it." He growled and drifted into sleep. He dreamed of seeing his family being together again forever. Then a wolf leaped for his father and they both tumbled off a cliff. Down, down into the water beneath the cliff. Then the pups faded one by one until two were left and then both disapeared. Marrow howled in despair. Then he too fell off the cliff.
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Marrow
Aug 25, 2009 10:50:28 GMT -5
Post by Aslan on Aug 25, 2009 10:50:28 GMT -5
Okay so there are a few things I'd like you to change first before I accept it ok?
1. Run it through spellcheck. It's a little bit rough in that area. 2. His personality is very split, which is ok. But he can only be a softie with pups or be sad about his family in secret. Because the witch would kill him then. 3.Please make your history a little clearer. 4. Lastly in your RP Sample you mention him writting in a notebook....he's a wolf so he can't really do that.
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Marrow
Aug 29, 2009 12:22:07 GMT -5
Post by Aslan on Aug 29, 2009 12:22:07 GMT -5
Accepted! Good Bio. You will now be known as Marrow
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